Oh, it was alright
I didn't care too much for the storyline, however, it was a mario/sonic sprite parody, and there are thousands of those in the portal today.
You did the sound, effects and spriting pretty good so you get a 7.
It seems most people like this and it's better than lots of the shit in the portal today (like MY FIRST MOVIE IM 11 LOL!!) but.. good job, I guess.
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